Phantom Spiral, before the Hurricane

A few years ago, I started a webcomic called 'Phantom Spiral', made some progress with it, and fell into the trap so many artists find themselves in of being dissatisfied with their own work, and starting over from scratch. Redevelopment stretched out over time, and along the way, I learned more about of the stark lack of representation of women and minorities in scifi stories, and found I had an opportunity to add something of value to the genre. Changing the gender and race of the main character allowed the story to grow and form in ways I had not before explored relating to racism and other social issues, and Phantom Hurricane was born. Check out a few pages of the first version below..